Monday 14 May 2018

Ruby's Autumn Poem

               Autumn

Crunchy leaves drifting in the air
Feeling the breeze gently touch
Deciduous trees slowly losing leaves
Goldish leaves shimmering in the sun
Colourful leaves holding on tight
Crumbly leaves getting crunched up
Whistling birds flying past
Jackets on, buttons done up

By Ruby

4 comments:

  1. A wonderful poem Ruby... I like all the amazing adjectives!:D

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  2. WOW room 18 are becoming poets! Those adjectives are some of the best I have seen! Kai Pa!👍👍👍

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  3. Well done Ruby your poem is stunning. My favourite line was colourful leaves holding on tight.

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  4. A very descriptive poem Ruby - well done!

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