Wednesday, 16 May 2018

Erin's Autumn Poem


A pair of love birds
Singing in the tree
Flaky leaves fluttering
Landing on the foggy green grass
Red and orange mixed coloured leaves
Gliding to the ground
Butterflies whizzing all around
Camelia flower petals
Floating to the dewy wet grass

By Erin


  1. I like all the different colours you used for the words they really represent autumn and all of your poem is phenomenal!

  2. Erin's Granny21 May 2018 at 17:55

    Oh Erin what a lovely poem. Love that you used the butterfly to describe Autumn :)

  3. What an awesome poem Erin! Love the way you described the colours and how you said the leaves "glided" to the ground, well done! :)

    - Your big sister, Kaydee ;)

  4. Erin's Mum22 May 2018 at 16:25

    Well done Eri - what a beautiful poem with some great adjectives. I love the colours and picture you used too! Keep up the awesome work!

    Love from Mummy xxx

  5. Such a pretty and colorful poem Erin! Loved it. Keep up the good work.

  6. Erin such an awesome use of words.
    It captured my imagination.

  7. A very descriptive poem Erin and colourful too - well done!