Autumn
Leaves fluttering like a butterfly while falling to the ground
Trees’ leaves falling off the trees
Birds in every tree making wonderful sounds
Wind pushing the clouds into different shapes
Sun bright with it’s sunbeams shining on the ground
By Brodie 
Brodie,I really like how you described all of your words and added a really nice picture to the poem. My favourite sentence is wind pushing the clouds into different shapes.Good job :)
ReplyDeleteI liked the similie saying... Leaves fluttering like a butterfly while falling to the ground. All of those wonderful phrases were extraordinary Brodie.
ReplyDeleteWow Brodie what a lovely poem. I really liked the sentence "Birds in every tree making wonderful sounds" because I also love listening to the birds in the bright colourful trees. I think your poem is remarkable. From Chantelle.
ReplyDeleteWhy do I feel that every single poem is like a metaphor? Ki pa Brodie!
ReplyDeleteWow Brodie I love your autumn poem it is wonderful and I liked when you said leaves fluttering like a butterfly.
ReplyDeleteA very descriptive poem Jessica - well done!
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