Wednesday, 16 May 2018

Brodie's Autumn Poem

Autumn
Leaves fluttering like a butterfly while falling to the ground
Trees’ leaves falling off the trees
Birds in every tree making wonderful sounds
Wind pushing the clouds into different shapes
Sun bright with it’s sunbeams shining on the ground

By Brodie  

4 comments:

  1. Brodie,I really like how you described all of your words and added a really nice picture to the poem. My favourite sentence is wind pushing the clouds into different shapes.Good job :)

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  2. I liked the similie saying... Leaves fluttering like a butterfly while falling to the ground. All of those wonderful phrases were extraordinary Brodie.

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  3. Wow Brodie what a lovely poem. I really liked the sentence "Birds in every tree making wonderful sounds" because I also love listening to the birds in the bright colourful trees. I think your poem is remarkable. From Chantelle.

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  4. Why do I feel that every single poem is like a metaphor? Ki pa Brodie!

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