tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4816695092932671545.post5654513181814887236..comments2019-07-30T04:25:57.872+12:00Comments on Room18@Sunnyhills: Brodie's Autumn PoemSHS Blog Adminhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00174490164837515973noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4816695092932671545.post-69307900303974683722018-07-12T13:27:52.218+12:002018-07-12T13:27:52.218+12:00A very descriptive poem Jessica - well done!A very descriptive poem Jessica - well done!Mrs Driverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18223772075242416209noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4816695092932671545.post-12271126844770775592018-05-25T18:44:15.739+12:002018-05-25T18:44:15.739+12:00Wow Brodie I love your autumn poem it is wonderful...Wow Brodie I love your autumn poem it is wonderful and I liked when you said leaves fluttering like a butterfly. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4816695092932671545.post-19229053126046020632018-05-21T21:16:43.406+12:002018-05-21T21:16:43.406+12:00Why do I feel that every single poem is like a met...Why do I feel that every single poem is like a metaphor? Ki pa Brodie!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4816695092932671545.post-91889649632844975052018-05-21T20:19:36.312+12:002018-05-21T20:19:36.312+12:00Wow Brodie what a lovely poem. I really liked the...Wow Brodie what a lovely poem. I really liked the sentence "Birds in every tree making wonderful sounds" because I also love listening to the birds in the bright colourful trees. I think your poem is remarkable. From Chantelle. Chantelle B.Wnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4816695092932671545.post-87257087402867469542018-05-21T08:26:57.784+12:002018-05-21T08:26:57.784+12:00I liked the similie saying... Leaves fluttering li...I liked the similie saying... Leaves fluttering like a butterfly while falling to the ground. All of those wonderful phrases were extraordinary Brodie. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4816695092932671545.post-19403706652306920562018-05-17T18:40:45.608+12:002018-05-17T18:40:45.608+12:00Brodie,I really like how you described all of your...Brodie,I really like how you described all of your words and added a really nice picture to the poem. My favourite sentence is wind pushing the clouds into different shapes.Good job :) Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com