Autumn
Orange, red and gold leaves falling gently onto the ground like a tissue
Wind howling, blowing down the crunchy leaves
Children’s footsteps pressed into the crunchy leaves
Children snuggling into their jackets
By Ryan
Welcome to Room 18's blog for 2018. We are an awesome Year 4 class and our teacher is Mrs Morris. We are looking forward to working together and learning lots of exciting and new things this year! Check our blog regularly to see what we have been up to. We would love to read your comments.
Ryan your poem is phenomenal and amazing. I like how you describe Autumn so well!
ReplyDeleteGreat job Ryan!...I can see hat you have put a lot of effort into your poem.I like how you said wind howling, blowing down the crunchy leaves.well done!
ReplyDeleteGood job Ryan! Even though you only have four sentences they were all nice and long! Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteYour poem has all the things it needs like... adjectives, awesome sentences, an amazing picture and last of all presented beautifully.
ReplyDeleteGood job Ryan. My favourite part was the line when you described the sound of children's footstep and the crunchy leaves.
ReplyDeleteWOW!! Amazing work Ryan every word in this poem is beautiful!! Keep up the amazing work :)
ReplyDeleteA very descriptive poem Ryan - well done!
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