Autumn
Leaves fall, drifting slowly
Crunchy leaves crumble underneath my feet
Crunchy leaves crumble underneath my feet
Leaves descending as slowly as a feather
Warm air touches the crispy dew like it was saying, “Hi!”
Wind passes softly, but it is gone as soon as it came
Delighted kids scream as they jump in crumpled orange leaves
Birds whistle as they pass us quickly
By Danya
Wow Danya that poem was spectacular!
ReplyDeleteFantastic work!!This poem has LOTS of texture and TREES! :)
ReplyDeleteAll of those phrases you used are absolutely true! For example ... Warm air touches the crispy dew like it was saying "hi!". Brilliant!
ReplyDelete*takes bow* thank you for commenting on my fabulous poem. Good job to me I guess!
ReplyDeleteWow Danya your poem is amazing. I liked how you said Crunchy leaves crumble underneath my feet. From Danielle!
ReplyDeleteA very descriptive poem Danya - well done!
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