Wednesday, 16 May 2018

Danya's Autumn Poem

Autumn

Leaves fall, drifting slowly
Crunchy leaves crumble underneath my feet
Leaves descending as slowly as a feather
Warm air touches the crispy dew like it was saying, “Hi!”
Wind passes softly, but it is gone as soon as it came
Delighted kids scream as they jump in crumpled orange leaves
Birds whistle as they pass us quickly

By Danya

5 comments:

  1. Wow Danya that poem was spectacular!

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  2. Fantastic work!!This poem has LOTS of texture and TREES! :)

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  3. All of those phrases you used are absolutely true! For example ... Warm air touches the crispy dew like it was saying "hi!". Brilliant!

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  4. *takes bow* thank you for commenting on my fabulous poem. Good job to me I guess!

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  5. Wow Danya your poem is amazing. I liked how you said Crunchy leaves crumble underneath my feet. From Danielle!

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